With the head writer and creative genius, Alan Sorkin, leaving The West Wing this season, it’s no longer the same show it used to be. Instead, it seems no more than a ghost of its former self, as John Wells (the producer and writer who’s stepped into Sorkin’s shoes) attempts to take over.
Whether Wells made a conscious decision to change how the characters are portrayed (and their dialogue) or whether his scripting is just his own unconscious attitudes about how he sees things seeping through, it seems quite obvious to me that everything that made The West Wing great is now missing. (Wells also contributes, or did contribute, to ER, which I really like, so I’m not putting him down by saying any of this – merely that his writing style was the wrong choice for The West Wing.)
Under Sorkin, the characters had a kind of frantic energy. The dialogue was fast, witty, and each character played off of the other much as do musical instruments in a concert. While many episodes had melodramatic scenes, there was always the sense that, as the characters went through their trauma, an ironic commentary on their situation remained. Nobody actually sank into a despair that sapped the viewer of intellectual enjoyment of what was going on. Rather than just having our heartstrings tugged, we also got some good cerebral enjoyment out of everything.
In the new season, while characters still walk quickly down hallways, there are moments of dialogue filled with pregnant , and uncomfortably unfulfilled, pauses, waiting for that immediate comeback of somebody else that I’ve come to expect. There was far too much focus on Bartlett’s home life and his despair. He seems to have lost his self-confidence and that aspect of him that makes him a leader and a scholar. At first I could forgive this because of the circumstances of his missing daughter – but when it continued, I realised it was more an overall writing change than it was a way of addressing the specific plot development. I simply don’t like Sheen’s character anymore – or even, really, that of anybody else.
I don’t find myself grinning in appreciating of things said, or anticipating confrontations between characters because I want to see what they’ll say. I’m no longer involved in the story and characters, instead I’m simply watching a kind of “going through the motions” soap opera unfold in front of me. Everybody seems to be shown dreading events and having a kind of “hangdog” expression, rather than energetically rising to each challenge and beating it back. It’s now a kind of mutual “woe is me” gathering, making it impossible to ever share in a sense of victory, either through actual problem solving or pure personal conviction. It’s simply no longer any fun.
One problem may be that Wells is trying too hard to keep things as they were. He’s just not up to the task. If he took it and changed it so that it fit his writing style completely, then it would be better. It wouldn’t be the same show (of course) but at least it wouldn’t fail by trying to be the same show and not succeeding. With ER, there mainly is just a lot of melodrama – but it’s good melodrama and it doesn’t only showcase negative emotions. If we have to lose the biting wit of Sorkin, it should at least be replaced by the full range of things of which Wells is capable – not just an unsucessful attempt to emulate it.
I’ll probably still keep watching it a little while longer, but I doubt that I’ll ever like it again as much as I did – which is a shame. I don’t know what political in-fighting caused Sorkin to leave the show. But, whatever it was, I don’t think it will be winning another Emmy – and I think that the studio executives shot themselves in the foot (assuming that they were the ones to cause Sorkin’s departure) by allowing it to happen.